Five Second Projects Part 10: “Something Good, Something Bad”

May 29, 2009

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This time, it’s all about constructive criticism. The theme for the week is “Something Good, Something Bad.” Submit a short project based on the theme. Then for the project you must comment on AT LEAST three other videos in the “Something Good, Something Bad.” Vimeo Channel. In the comments, say one thing that you like about their entry and one thing that could be better. Something Good and Something Bad.



After watching a piece, people have a tendency to say “Nice Work” (guilty) or “Wow, you animated that?” And, while it can be nice to hear encouraging words all day, it doesn’t do much to push you forward into better design and animation skills. Use these constructive comments to make your work better and better every time. Hopefully constructive criticism will continue though these Five Second Projects.



What is constructive criticism?
DON’T say “That Sucks.”
DO say “Great colors! The animation towards the end gets a little too fast. Try slowing it down.” Keep in mind, criticism can include ideas on how to make the piece better, not to insult their work. With that said, don’t be afraid to state your true opinion. Pulling punches isn’t helping. Expect me to be



What Are Five Second Projects?
We all want to make cool shit for our reel right? Sometimes you just need a theme to get you started. Use the theme “Something Good, Something Bad” to make a five second motion piece and link it in the comments of this blog post. “Shout Box” submissions will not be found and will not be added to the channel. Please be sure to post a link in this post’s comments to ensure me seeing it.



It’s really great to see so much participation. Tell a friend about the five second projects and get them involved too. Don’t forget to push yourself to try something new every week. What about a new piece of software or technique you have wanted to try?


DONT FORGET TO GIVE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!

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  1. Superman In Training on May 29, 2009 said...

    I really like the theme of this 5 sec project.Hopefully I can make time to have fun with it.
    It would have been nice for you to provide a direct link to the Vimeo in case some people haven’t been there before. =)

  2. Jeremy Ian Thomas on May 29, 2009 said...

    This is why I love this blog.

    Nick listens to the people.

    Awesome.

  3. Térence on June 1, 2009 said...

    Here is my entry ( not too in keeping with the theme… )
    http://vimeo.com/4941200

  4. John Waddington on June 1, 2009 said...

    I instantly thought of Sergio Leone music i.e. The Good the Bad and the Ugly.

  5. Ryan Hamilton on June 1, 2009 said...

    Now for my two cents on the theme, this directed at everyone. Personally I think some of these 5 second projects get taken to literally. In Hero, I didn’t think using the exact word Hero was expected but more so your own creative interpretation on what the word Hero means to you. Again in the last one, many people actually wrote out “Just Type”, or “Only Type” when in fact I strongly felt the piece was to only use typography and nothing else regardless of the mood or concept one came up with. More so in this theme. I never read it as animate a piece that must resemble something good / something bad. Sure give it a Ying Yang slant but I see the something good/bad part of this weeks project soley on the feed back of the viewers and not on the execution of the creator. Cause you can’t hear my tone, this is a happy post not one in annoyance or anger :)

  6. Steve Renard on June 1, 2009 said...

    I’ve never posted a response to the 5sec Challenge here before – where do I upload the video? I uploaded to Vimeo but the channel doesn’t seem to have the option…

    Here’s a link to my response:
    http://www.vimeo.com/4950236

    (though apparently it’s still converting on their end…)

  7. Térence on June 1, 2009 said...

    Here is my second entry http://vimeo.com/4952038

  8. Andy Baumgartner on June 1, 2009 said...
  9. Fabrizio on June 2, 2009 said...

    Let´s trysomething…
    http://www.vimeo.com/4954101

  10. Michael on June 2, 2009 said...

    My first entry ever: http://www.vimeo.com/4946314

  11. Stefan on June 2, 2009 said...

    please don’t forget the interview for my thesis.
    thanks Nick!

    cheers from Austria

  12. Virgilio Valladares on June 2, 2009 said...

    Well, this is my first entry for the 5 seconds projects,but I visit your website regularly, and I really enjoy watching the entries. Very inspirational. Here’s mine: http://www.vimeo.com/4967182

  13. Patrick on June 2, 2009 said...

    Alright so here’s mine: http://vimeo.com/4970748
    Still waiting for Vimeo to convert it though.

  14. Eddee Horsey on June 2, 2009 said...

    I know this isn’t exactly what the project called for, but I need some input. As much as possible please!
    http://www.vimeo.com/4972790

  15. Memlap on June 3, 2009 said...

    http://vimeo.com/4949517
    This is my first participation and I do not use AE a lot so don’t be rude with me !
    thanks ! :-)

  16. glidingtide on June 3, 2009 said...

    My abstract effort:
    http://vimeo.com/4979847

  17. Nicole Lahr on June 3, 2009 said...

    My first submission…http://www.vimeo.com/4973008

  18. Nicole Lahr on June 3, 2009 said...
  19. Patrick on June 3, 2009 said...

    Wow, I uploaded my video yesterday and I JUST received an email it’s ready. So I’ll just post it again: http://vimeo.com/4970748

  20. Lars on June 3, 2009 said...
  21. PhAtl Designs on June 3, 2009 said...

    Took the advice in the comments made on my piece and made some changes. Let me know what you think of the revisions. Stay Animated!
    http://www.vimeo.com/4991065

  22. glidingtide on June 4, 2009 said...

    I’ve updated my piece:
    http://www.vimeo.com/4997031

    Sadly is only in SD, but I’ll update it to HD next week.

    Thanks for the feedback on the previous version.

  23. Leon on June 4, 2009 said...

    Here is my effort, enjoy..
    http://www.vimeo.com/4992457

  24. Rico on June 4, 2009 said...

    http://www.vimeo.com/5004537
    second entry to the 5 second projects

  25. Doug Sprowls on June 4, 2009 said...

    Love what you have goin here!

    http://vimeo.com/5005437

  26. kopidlno on June 4, 2009 said...
  27. gotinzo on June 5, 2009 said...
  28. Nathan on June 5, 2009 said...

    Here’s mine!
    http://www.vimeo.com/5015270

    now time to get some sleep…

  29. poje on June 5, 2009 said...

    here’s my go at it! http://vimeo.com/5021452

  30. Raphouu on June 6, 2009 said...
  31. bubunya on June 6, 2009 said...

    Hope its not too late :O))
    Was running out of time, so… More sketch than finished one :O)
    http://www.vimeo.com/5038893

  32. mcroskey on June 7, 2009 said...

    Hi Nick,
    I love this site!
    Here is my first 5sec Proj. Entry:
    http://vimeo.com/5038247

  33. thilo on June 7, 2009 said...

    my first try for your 5sec projekts

    http://vimeo.com/5047960

  34. mcroskey on June 7, 2009 said...

    Sorry, I set the video to private because I was trying to replace it with a version with audio and was running into a weird encoding problem.
    Anyways here’s the new link http://vimeo.com/5050408

  35. Forty on June 8, 2009 said...

    hi nick,

    here is my 5sec project entry:
    http://www.vimeo.com/5066817

    greetz,
    andy

  36. robert riendeau on June 8, 2009 said...

    Hey Nick,
    Please check out my effort for the “Sumpin good, sumpin bad” 5sec project.
    Thanks,
    Robert
    http://www.vimeo.com/5066499

  37. Ben Melton on June 9, 2009 said...

    Hey,

    Here’s my entry:
    http://vimeo.com/5064171

    Really enjoyed all the entries so far.
    Ben

  38. Trevor on June 9, 2009 said...

    Whew…

    Thanks for the extension, Nick!

    I’m big fan of the site!

    Here’s my first attempt for 5 second Projects.

    http://www.vimeo.com/5073675

    Thanks for all you’re doing!

    -Trevor

  39. Jeremy Ian Thomas on June 9, 2009 said...

    Has Vimeo been slow for you guys?

  40. brice dupuy on June 10, 2009 said...

    Hey Nick,
    here’s my first 5second project participation,
    http://vimeo.com/5079896

    Very nice website, keep up the good work!
    Sharing your thoughts and knowledge on a regular basis makes your blog one great place to go to,.

  41. Daniel on June 10, 2009 said...

    Hello everyone, this is my video: http://www.vimeo.com/5094860/.

  42. thegorilla on June 10, 2009 said...

    Yeah, vimeo is really slow lately everybody. Don’t worry though, I will get to all your videos.

  43. Espenja on June 10, 2009 said...

    here’s mine:http://vimeo.com/5101506

  44. johnny on June 10, 2009 said...
  45. German on June 10, 2009 said...

    Hey! Here’s my entry:
    http://vimeo.com/5102741
    Thanks!

  46. Rickard Bengtsson on June 11, 2009 said...

    First upload on vimeo, first time in this 5sec project :)
    Really nice idea, I hope the projects will continue for a long time.

    Here’s mine:
    http://vimeo.com/5115741

  47. Thomas Velazquez on June 11, 2009 said...

    Great work everyone, Had to Join :)

    http://vimeo.com/5118645

  48. Nathan on June 12, 2009 said...

    Version 2 of mine is up:
    http://www.vimeo.com/5123862

  49. kopidlno on June 12, 2009 said...

    Replaced old 5 sec spot with revised version. Its still at the same spot http://www.vimeo.com/5006875.

  50. Jonathan Salinas on June 13, 2009 said...

    hey guys this is my first entry ever. Hope you like it.

    I create mine on wide resolution and when I uploaded it to vimeo, it came out all squished in.

  51. Jonathan Salinas on June 13, 2009 said...

    forgot to put the link oops
    http://www.vimeo.com/5136838

  52. Lucia on June 14, 2009 said...

    Well, I must have been dreaming the contest was ending today… :O/
    Anyway, for the curious ones, here’s my entry :
    http://vimeo.com/5150208
    not bad I think… just somewhat late… ;-)

  53. Steve S. on June 16, 2009 said...

    Well, I missed the deadline of course… but here’s a late entry…

    http://vimeo.com/5172149

  54. Remoz on June 17, 2009 said...

    Hi! A 5 seconds cartoon…
    http://vimeo.com/5193235

    ?Sample by Dj Gero: myspace.com/djgero

    ?All Remoz Univers is on: r-e-m-o-z.blogspot.com/

    ?Oh pLeAsE! Be mY fRiEnD on: fr-fr.facebook.com/people/Remoz-Fakebook/1406981277

  55. Yimbo on June 17, 2009 said...

    Hi.
    Maybe too late but here’s is my entry:

    http://vimeo.com/5188524

    What do you think?

  56. Dan Holt on June 27, 2009 said...

    My first real animation other than creating basic wedding slideshows with AfterEffects. The animation doesn’t fit the theme perse, but I know the animation is good (cool), my opinion, but the camera work needs some work, (bad). I’m really starting to learn how to work better with the camera but just started so I’m posting this anyway.

    http://www.vimeo.com/5287287

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