Five Second Projects Part 10: “Something Good, Something Bad”

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This time, it’s all about constructive criticism. The theme for the week is “Something Good, Something Bad.” Submit a short project based on the theme. Then for the project you must comment on AT LEAST three other videos in the “Something Good, Something Bad.” Vimeo Channel. In the comments, say one thing that you like about their entry and one thing that could be better. Something Good and Something Bad.



After watching a piece, people have a tendency to say “Nice Work” (guilty) or “Wow, you animated that?” And, while it can be nice to hear encouraging words all day, it doesn’t do much to push you forward into better design and animation skills. Use these constructive comments to make your work better and better every time. Hopefully constructive criticism will continue though these Five Second Projects.



What is constructive criticism?
DON’T say “That Sucks.”
DO say “Great colors! The animation towards the end gets a little too fast. Try slowing it down.” Keep in mind, criticism can include ideas on how to make the piece better, not to insult their work. With that said, don’t be afraid to state your true opinion. Pulling punches isn’t helping. Expect me to be



What Are Five Second Projects?
We all want to make cool shit for our reel right? Sometimes you just need a theme to get you started. Use the theme “Something Good, Something Bad” to make a five second motion piece and link it in the comments of this blog post. “Shout Box” submissions will not be found and will not be added to the channel. Please be sure to post a link in this post’s comments to ensure me seeing it.



It’s really great to see so much participation. Tell a friend about the five second projects and get them involved too. Don’t forget to push yourself to try something new every week. What about a new piece of software or technique you have wanted to try?


DONT FORGET TO GIVE CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM!

59 people have commented on this post. You should too!

  1. Superman In Training says:

    I really like the theme of this 5 sec project.Hopefully I can make time to have fun with it.
    It would have been nice for you to provide a direct link to the Vimeo in case some people haven’t been there before. =)

  2. This is why I love this blog.

    Nick listens to the people.

    Awesome.

  3. Térence says:

    Here is my entry ( not too in keeping with the theme… )
    http://vimeo.com/4941200

  4. John Waddington says:

    I instantly thought of Sergio Leone music i.e. The Good the Bad and the Ugly.

  5. Now for my two cents on the theme, this directed at everyone. Personally I think some of these 5 second projects get taken to literally. In Hero, I didn’t think using the exact word Hero was expected but more so your own creative interpretation on what the word Hero means to you. Again in the last one, many people actually wrote out “Just Type”, or “Only Type” when in fact I strongly felt the piece was to only use typography and nothing else regardless of the mood or concept one came up with. More so in this theme. I never read it as animate a piece that must resemble something good / something bad. Sure give it a Ying Yang slant but I see the something good/bad part of this weeks project soley on the feed back of the viewers and not on the execution of the creator. Cause you can’t hear my tone, this is a happy post not one in annoyance or anger :)

  6. Steve Renard says:

    I’ve never posted a response to the 5sec Challenge here before – where do I upload the video? I uploaded to Vimeo but the channel doesn’t seem to have the option…

    Here’s a link to my response:
    http://www.vimeo.com/4950236

    (though apparently it’s still converting on their end…)

  7. Térence says:

    Here is my second entry http://vimeo.com/4952038

  8. Andy Baumgartner says:
  9. Fabrizio says:

    Let´s trysomething…
    http://www.vimeo.com/4954101

  10. Stefan says:

    please don’t forget the interview for my thesis.
    thanks Nick!

    cheers from Austria

  11. Well, this is my first entry for the 5 seconds projects,but I visit your website regularly, and I really enjoy watching the entries. Very inspirational. Here’s mine: http://www.vimeo.com/4967182

  12. Patrick says:

    Alright so here’s mine: http://vimeo.com/4970748
    Still waiting for Vimeo to convert it though.

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  14. Eddee Horsey says:

    I know this isn’t exactly what the project called for, but I need some input. As much as possible please!
    http://www.vimeo.com/4972790

  15. Memlap says:

    http://vimeo.com/4949517
    This is my first participation and I do not use AE a lot so don’t be rude with me !
    thanks ! :-)

  16. Patrick says:

    Wow, I uploaded my video yesterday and I JUST received an email it’s ready. So I’ll just post it again: http://vimeo.com/4970748

  17. Took the advice in the comments made on my piece and made some changes. Let me know what you think of the revisions. Stay Animated!
    http://www.vimeo.com/4991065

  18. glidingtide says:

    I’ve updated my piece:
    http://www.vimeo.com/4997031

    Sadly is only in SD, but I’ll update it to HD next week.

    Thanks for the feedback on the previous version.

  19. Rico says:

    http://www.vimeo.com/5004537
    second entry to the 5 second projects

  20. Doug Sprowls says:

    Love what you have goin here!

    http://vimeo.com/5005437

  21. Nathan says:

    Here’s mine!
    http://www.vimeo.com/5015270

    now time to get some sleep…

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  23. bubunya says:

    Hope its not too late :O))
    Was running out of time, so… More sketch than finished one :O)
    http://www.vimeo.com/5038893

  24. mcroskey says:

    Hi Nick,
    I love this site!
    Here is my first 5sec Proj. Entry:
    http://vimeo.com/5038247

  25. thilo says:

    my first try for your 5sec projekts

    http://vimeo.com/5047960

  26. mcroskey says:

    Sorry, I set the video to private because I was trying to replace it with a version with audio and was running into a weird encoding problem.
    Anyways here’s the new link http://vimeo.com/5050408

  27. Forty says:

    hi nick,

    here is my 5sec project entry:
    http://www.vimeo.com/5066817

    greetz,
    andy

  28. robert riendeau says:

    Hey Nick,
    Please check out my effort for the “Sumpin good, sumpin bad” 5sec project.
    Thanks,
    Robert
    http://www.vimeo.com/5066499

  29. Ben Melton says:

    Hey,

    Here’s my entry:
    http://vimeo.com/5064171

    Really enjoyed all the entries so far.
    Ben

  30. Trevor says:

    Whew…

    Thanks for the extension, Nick!

    I’m big fan of the site!

    Here’s my first attempt for 5 second Projects.

    http://www.vimeo.com/5073675

    Thanks for all you’re doing!

    -Trevor

  31. Has Vimeo been slow for you guys?

  32. brice dupuy says:

    Hey Nick,
    here’s my first 5second project participation,
    http://vimeo.com/5079896

    Very nice website, keep up the good work!
    Sharing your thoughts and knowledge on a regular basis makes your blog one great place to go to,.

  33. Daniel says:

    Hello everyone, this is my video: http://www.vimeo.com/5094860/.

  34. thegorilla says:

    Yeah, vimeo is really slow lately everybody. Don’t worry though, I will get to all your videos.

  35. German says:

    Hey! Here’s my entry:
    http://vimeo.com/5102741
    Thanks!

  36. Rickard Bengtsson says:

    First upload on vimeo, first time in this 5sec project :)
    Really nice idea, I hope the projects will continue for a long time.

    Here’s mine:
    http://vimeo.com/5115741

  37. kopidlno says:

    Replaced old 5 sec spot with revised version. Its still at the same spot http://www.vimeo.com/5006875.

  38. hey guys this is my first entry ever. Hope you like it.

    I create mine on wide resolution and when I uploaded it to vimeo, it came out all squished in.

  39. Lucia says:

    Well, I must have been dreaming the contest was ending today… :O/
    Anyway, for the curious ones, here’s my entry :
    http://vimeo.com/5150208
    not bad I think… just somewhat late… ;-)

  40. Steve S. says:

    Well, I missed the deadline of course… but here’s a late entry…

    http://vimeo.com/5172149

  41. Remoz says:

    Hi! A 5 seconds cartoon…
    http://vimeo.com/5193235

    ?Sample by Dj Gero: myspace.com/djgero

    ?All Remoz Univers is on: r-e-m-o-z.blogspot.com/

    ?Oh pLeAsE! Be mY fRiEnD on: fr-fr.facebook.com/people/Remoz-Fakebook/1406981277

  42. Yimbo says:

    Hi.
    Maybe too late but here’s is my entry:

    http://vimeo.com/5188524

    What do you think?

  43. Dan Holt says:

    My first real animation other than creating basic wedding slideshows with AfterEffects. The animation doesn’t fit the theme perse, but I know the animation is good (cool), my opinion, but the camera work needs some work, (bad). I’m really starting to learn how to work better with the camera but just started so I’m posting this anyway.

    http://www.vimeo.com/5287287

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